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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter 1. Explain why you would like the job 2. Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ 3. Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing a letter with the reference to an advertisement that I came across in an Australian magazine "The Times" published on Sunday, 25th May 2021. The ad was about a job for child care while living with the family for six months. My mother owned a childcare center in Pakistan and I grew up witnessing the way she used to manage everything. She is my role model and because of her I started developing interest in the same field. Under her mentorship I learnt ways to deal with the children and my interest grew gradually. I have completed an "Early Childhood Development (ECD)" course recently. I was looking for a suitable job where I could get a chance to translate the knowledge gained during the course into practice. Having said that, I have also experienced the role of helper in a renowned day care named "Australia- Your childcare matters! ". My past experience and relevant certification makes me a potential candidate to be hired for this job. I love reading books and in my spare time I will continue doing the same activity along with exploring the city. I am interested in exploring the historical places which will allow me to learn about the city's culture and people in depth. I am determined to be selected for this job. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Farida
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing a letter with the reference to an advertisement that I came across in an Australian magazine
"
The Times
"
published on
Sunday, 25th May 2021
. The ad was about a job for child care while living with the family for six months.

My mother
owned
a childcare center in Pakistan and I grew up witnessing the way she
used
to manage everything. She is my role model and
because
of her I
started
developing interest in the same field. Under her mentorship I
learnt
ways to deal with the children and my interest grew
gradually
.

I have completed an
"
Early Childhood Development (
ECD
)
"
course recently. I was looking for a suitable job where I could
get
a chance to translate the knowledge gained during the course into practice. Having said that, I have
also
experienced the role of helper in a renowned day care named
"
Australia- Your childcare matters!
"
. My
past experience
and relevant certification
makes
me a potential candidate to
be hired
for this job.

I
love
reading books and in my spare time I will continue doing the same activity along with exploring the city. I
am interested
in exploring the historical places which will
allow
me to learn about the city's culture and
people
in depth.

I
am determined
to
be selected
for this job. Looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Farida
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter 1. Explain why you would like the job 2. Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ 3. Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
233 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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