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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

Dear Mr and Mrs Henry, Recently, I came across an advertisement, in which you have asked for someone from Spain to teach the Spanish language to your two children. I have decided to apply for it because the opportunity would help me meet the cost of running an orphanage in a remote village of the war-torn country in Latin America while also exploring the beautiful continent of Australia at the same time. In my defence of availing this opportunity, I would like to say that I have a bubbly and easy-going personality which makes it rather easy for me to relate to the children. Besides, I have also done babysitting job to help a few relatives of mine to take care of her two children after which I received some formal training on the first-hand experience in childcare. I have also finished a diploma in teaching children because I am passionate about teaching young childrenIn addition to taking care of your children, I could also prepare some delicious Spanish food and delicacies on some special occasions to surprise your friends and families. I am hoping that you would offer me the job. Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Maria Lucy
Dear Mr and Mrs Henry,

Recently, I came across an advertisement, in which you have
asked for
someone from Spain to teach the Spanish language to your two
children
. I have decided to apply for it
because
the opportunity would
help
me
meet
the cost of running an orphanage in a remote village of the war-torn country in Latin America while
also
exploring the
beautiful
continent of Australia at the same time.

In my
defence
of availing this opportunity, I would like to say that I have a bubbly and easy-going personality which
makes
it
rather
easy for me to relate to the
children
.
Besides
, I have
also
done babysitting job to
help
a few relatives of mine to take care of her two
children
after which I received
some
formal training on the
first
-hand experience in childcare. I have
also
finished a diploma in teaching
children
because
I am passionate about teaching young
childrenIn
addition to taking care of your
children
, I could
also
prepare
some
delicious Spanish food and delicacies on
some
special occasions to surprise your friends and families.

I am hoping that you would offer me the job. Thank you in advance.

Yours
sincerely
,

Maria Lucy
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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