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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter: * explain why you think you would be suitable for the job * say what else you could do for the family * give your reasons for wanting the job

Dear Mr and Mrs Thompson, I am writing with regard to your advertisement for a Malayalam tutor. I believe that I am highly suited for this job due to my qualifications and experience teaching Malayalam. I have a master degree in Malayalam language teaching from Calicut university. In addition, I have been working as a Malayalam tutor now for five years. In addition, to teaching Malayalam I can also educate your children about Kerala culture. I believe your children would be interested to know about Kerala tradition and I could supply books if they are keen to learn this. The main reason why I am interested in this job is because it will support my current studies. I’m currently studying for my PhD and my area of interest is teaching Malayalam to non-native children. Therefore, I believe that while teaching your children I will also benefit by understanding how non-native children learn. I would appreciate discussing this with you further when time permits. Yours faithfully, Mike Wattie
Dear Mr and Mrs Thompson,

I am writing with regard to your advertisement for a Malayalam tutor.

I believe that I am
highly
suited for this job due to my qualifications and experience
teaching
Malayalam.
I
have a master degree in Malayalam language
teaching
from
Calicut
university.
In addition
, I have been working as a Malayalam tutor
now
for five years.

In addition
, to
teaching
Malayalam I can
also
educate your
children
about Kerala culture. I believe your
children
would
be interested
to know about Kerala tradition and I could supply books if they are keen to learn this.

The main reason why I
am interested
in this job is
because
it will support my
current
studies. I’m
currently
studying for my PhD and my area of interest is
teaching
Malayalam to non-native
children
.
Therefore
, I believe that while
teaching
your
children
I will
also
benefit by understanding how non-native
children
learn.

I would appreciate discussing this with you
further
when time permits.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mike
Wattie
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter: * explain why you think you would be suitable for the job * say what else you could do for the family * give your reasons for wanting the job

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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