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Que.: You live in an area where some sport facilities are needed for people your age. Write a letter to local authorities. In your letter – Mention the existing facilities – Ask for more facilities to be built – Explain how these facilities will be useful for people your age.

Que. : You live in an area where some sport facilities are needed for people your age. Write a letter to local authorities. In your letter – Mention the existing facilities – Ask for more facilities to be built – Explain how these facilities will be useful for people your age. 0ByYQ

Respected Sir/Ma’am, I am writing this letter to provide extra sport facilities for adults residing in Gurukul, Ahmedabad. I am Namrata Purani. I am an engineer by profession. I live in Gurukul since 2018. Currently there are limited sports are available like badminton, volleyball and indoor games. However, there are no sports available for adults and working people. I would like to request you to construct advanced sports club for games such as cricket, swimming, lawn tennis which are more suitable for youngers. These sports facilities are more suitable for working people as they can spend quality time for themselves except work. By playing such sports they can reduce their stress level and feel relax. I hope you will take my suggestion in consideration. I look forward for your response. Your Faithfully, XYZ

Respected Sir/Ma’am,

I am writing this letter to provide extra You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
 facilities for adults residing in Possible spelling mistake found.GuruGurkhaGurusHurtfulGruelKarakul
Gurukul
, Ahmedabad.

I am Possible spelling mistake found.NarmadaNarrateNamathInamorataAmrita
Namrata
Possible spelling mistake found.Purana
Purani
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am an engineer by profession. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in Possible spelling mistake found.GuruGurkhaGurusHurtfulGruelKarakul
Gurukul
 since 2018. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Currently,
Currently
 there are limited
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 are available like badminton, volleyball and indoor games. However
, there are no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 available for adults and working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

I would like to request you to construct advanced You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 club for games such as cricket, swimming, lawn tennis which are more suitable for Possible spelling mistake found.youngerloungers
youngers
. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 facilities are more suitable for working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 as they can spend quality time for themselves except work. By playing such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 level and feel relax.

I hope you will take my suggestion in consideration. I look forward for your response.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
Faithfully
,

XYZ