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Que.: You live in an area where some sport facilities are needed for people your age. Write a letter to local authorities. In your letter – Mention the existing facilities – Ask for more facilities to be built – Explain how these facilities will be useful for people your age.

Que. : You live in an area where some sport facilities are needed for people your age. Write a letter to local authorities. In your letter – Mention the existing facilities – Ask for more facilities to be built – Explain how these facilities will be useful for people your age. 0ByYQ
Respected Sir/Ma’am, I am writing this letter to provide extra sport facilities for adults residing in Gurukul, Ahmedabad. I am Namrata Purani. I am an engineer by profession. I live in Gurukul since 2018. Currently there are limited sports are available like badminton, volleyball and indoor games. However, there are no sports available for adults and working people. I would like to request you to construct advanced sports club for games such as cricket, swimming, lawn tennis which are more suitable for youngers. These sports facilities are more suitable for working people as they can spend quality time for themselves except work. By playing such sports they can reduce their stress level and feel relax. I hope you will take my suggestion in consideration. I look forward for your response. Your Faithfully, XYZ
Respected Sir/Ma’am,

I am writing this letter to provide extra
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sport
facilities for adults residing in
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Gurukul
, Ahmedabad.

I am
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Namrata
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Purani
.
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I
am an engineer by profession.
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I
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live
in
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Gurukul
since 2018.
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Currently
there
are limited
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sports
are available like badminton, volleyball and indoor games.
However
, there are no
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sports
available for adults and working
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people
.

I would like to request you to construct advanced
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sports
club for games such as cricket, swimming, lawn tennis which are more suitable for
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youngers
. These
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sports
facilities are more suitable for working
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people
as they can spend quality time for themselves except work. By playing such
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sports
they can
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reduce
their
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stress
level and feel relax.

I hope you will take my suggestion in consideration. I look forward for your response.

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Your
Faithfully
,

XYZ
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IELTS letter Que. : You live in an area where some sport facilities are needed for people your age. Write a letter to local authorities. In your letter – Mention the existing facilities – Ask for more facilities to be built – Explain how these facilities will be useful for people your age.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
132 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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