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Hi guys, my name is Dũng, i'm 17 year old and to day i am going to tell you about an icident that i will always remember. It was one afternoon, due to the raging covid epidemic, I had to study online at home. At that moment my phone rang and I quickly picked it up. It was her grandmother who suddenly had a severe fever because she was old or feverish, so her parents bought medicine for her and told me to take it away in the morning. But because I was so busy studying, I forgot to bring her medicine. At home, I only have one bicycle, I don't think much of it. I put a cigarette in my backpack and drove off at a very fast speed. When I was about to go to my grandmother's house, due to cycling too fast, my backpack broke and fell on the road, at that time I didn't know anything and continued to pedal suddenly a voice called, calling me to turn back, I looked in a panic. When I saw a tall, thin, handsome adult calling me back and holding my book bag in my hand, I quickly looked behind me and saw that my bag was gone. I hurriedly stopped the car and pedaled quickly to the young man, I thanked him, then took my backpack and continued, because I was in a hurry, I didn't think much of him. After everything was fine, I started cycling home. The autumn air is cool, and quiet. I listen to music while walking, feeling very peaceful and I remember the young man who was lucky enough to have him and my grandmother had medicine to take. And I think in this life there are still a lot of good people that we should respect. I went home to eat and told my parents about today my parents laughed and didn't say anything but they also thanked me for being a good person good boy. To summarize. Those are the situations that I have the hardest time to forget.
Hi guys, my name is
Dũng
,
i'm
17 year
old
and to day
i
am going to
tell
you about an
icident
that
i
will always remember.

It was one afternoon, due to the raging
covid
epidemic, I had to study online at home. At that moment my phone rang and I
quickly
picked it up. It was her grandmother who
suddenly
had a severe fever
because
she was
old
or feverish,
so
her parents
bought
medicine for her and
told
me to take it away in the morning.
But
because
I was
so
busy studying, I forgot to bring her medicine. At home, I
only
have one bicycle, I don't
think
much of it. I put a cigarette in my backpack and drove off at a
very
fast
speed. When I was about to go to my grandmother's
house
, due to cycling too
fast
, my backpack broke and fell on the road, at that time I didn't know anything and continued to pedal
suddenly
a voice called, calling me to turn back, I looked in a panic. When I
saw
a tall, thin, handsome adult calling me back and holding my book bag in my hand, I
quickly
looked behind me and
saw
that my bag
was gone
. I
hurriedly
stopped
the car and pedaled
quickly
to the young
man
, I thanked him, then took my backpack and continued,
because
I was in a hurry, I didn't
think
much of him. After everything was fine, I
started
cycling home. The autumn air is cool, and quiet. I listen to music while walking, feeling
very
peaceful and I remember the young
man
who was lucky
enough
to have him and my grandmother had medicine to take. And I
think
in this life there are
still
a lot of
good
people
that we should respect. I went home to eat and
told
my parents about
today
my parents laughed and didn't say anything
but
they
also
thanked me for being a
good
person
good
boy.

To summarize
. Those are the situations that I have the hardest time to forget.
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IELTS letter Write about an incident in your life

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3 paragraphs
348 words
5.5
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