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You have recently stayed in a hotel and after returning back you realise that you have left a piece of clothing at your hotel room. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

You have recently stayed in a hotel and after returning back you realise that you have left a piece of clothing at your hotel room. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. aAwDP
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to seek your help in finding my T-shirt. Last week, I and my friends stayed in your hotel for a week to travel around the town. The room I stayed in was room 106. I checked in on 10th July and checked out on 17th July. The room was amazing and the services were great too. Unfortunately, while I unpacking my luggage, I realized that I had forgotten one of my T-shirts. I left it in the wardrobe of the room probably. It was a very colorful shirt with many symbols on it. That is my favorite T-shirt because I paid about 100$ for that shirt with my first salary. Therefore, I would highly appreciate it if you can find the shirt and send it to my address mentioned on the envelope. Thank you for your time. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Nguyen Huy Minh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to seek your
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help
in finding my T-shirt. Last week, I and my friends stayed in your hotel for a week to travel around the town. The
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room
I stayed in was
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
106. I
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checked
in on 10th July and
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checked
out on 17th July. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
was amazing and the services were great too.

Unfortunately, while
Did you mean "I'm unpacking", "I am unpacking", or "I was unpacking"?
I unpacking
my luggage, I realized that I had forgotten one of my T-shirts. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
it in the wardrobe of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
probably
. It was a
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very
colorful shirt with
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many
symbols on it.
That is
my favorite T-shirt
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because
I paid about
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$100".
100$
for that shirt with my
first
salary.

Therefore
, I would
highly
appreciate it if you can find the shirt and
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send
it to my address mentioned on the envelope.

Thank you for your time.

Looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Nguyen
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Huy
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Minh

IELTS letter You have recently stayed in a hotel and after returning back you realise that you have left a piece of clothing at your hotel room. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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