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Letter to a friend who will stay at your place

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Dear Sheena, Hope you’re doing well and looking forward to your stay at my place in Agra. I’m writing this letter to inform you about few important things that you need to know. You can collect the apartment’s keys from my friend Rekha who lives in the same building in apartment 102. Remember to call her beforehand as she has a full-time job and sometimes she extends her office shift due to work. As it is getting cold here, if you want you can switch on the heater by the power plug next to the main door. Also, please on the dishwasher 20 minutes in advance for washing the dishes. There are great places nearby to visit such as local market which is just 10 minutes away from my building. A new restaurant is opened called ‘A Grills’ which serves delicious India curries which are a must to try. I hope you have a good stay. See you soon. Warm Regards Sam

Dear Sheena,

Hope you’re doing well and looking forward to your stay at my place in Agra. I’m writing this letter to inform you about few This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 things that you need to know.

You can collect the apartment’s keys from my friend Possible spelling mistake found.RehabRochaRSHARebaRenaReva
Rekha
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 in the same building in apartment 102. Remember to call her beforehand as she has a full-time job and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 she extends her office shift due to work.

As it is getting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 here, if you want you can switch on the heater by the power plug next
 to the main door. Also
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 on the dishwasher 20 minutes in advance for washing the dishes.

There are great places nearby to visit such as local market which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 10 minutes away from my building. A new restaurant is opened
 called ‘A Grills’ which serves delicious India curries which are a After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use "must" or "have to" here.musthave to
must to
 try.

I hope you have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 stay. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Warm Regards

Sam

IELTS letter Letter to a friend who will stay at your place

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

161 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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