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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regard to detailed information about the work-related seminar. I am a software engineer and currently working with MSCI Technolgy. I have attended a several seminars including work-related in my own country. However, I have never been to abroad in my whole life. Its been an amazing opportunity for me not only to meet the delegates from different countries but also to explore country. I am keen to attend this seminar as It will help me to grow professionally in terms of technical skills. I would be grateful if you could more detailed information about this seminar such as when this seminar is the schedule and for how many days this seminar will be. also kindly provide some information about accommodation and its cost. kindly provide the details as soon as possible so I can make arrangements accordingly. Thank you in advance for your assistance. Yours Faithfully, Asmita

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regard to detailed information about the work-related seminar. I am a software engineer and currently working with MSCI Technolgy. I have attended a several seminars including work-related in my own country. However, I have never been to abroad in my whole life. Its been an amazing opportunity for me not only to meet the delegates from different countries but also to explore country. I am keen to attend this seminar as It will help me to grow professionally in terms of technical skills. I would be grateful if you could more detailed information about this seminar such as when this seminar is the schedule and for how many days this seminar will be. also kindly provide some information about accommodation and its cost. kindly provide the details as soon as possible so I can make arrangements accordingly. Thank you in advance for your assistance. Yours Faithfully, Asmita BJYPj
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regard to detailed information about the work-related seminar. I am a software engineer and currently working with MSCI Technolgy. I have attended a several seminars including work-related in my own country. However, I have never been to abroad in my whole life. Its been an amazing opportunity for me not only to meet the delegates from different countries but also to explore country. I am keen to attend this seminar as It will help me to grow professionally in terms of technical skills. I would be grateful if you could more detailed information about this seminar such as when this seminar is the schedule and for how many days this seminar will be. also kindly provide some information about accommodation and its cost. kindly provide the details as soon as possible so I can make arrangements accordingly. Thank you in advance for your assistance. Yours Faithfully, Asmita
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter with regard to detailed information about the work-related seminar.

I am a software engineer and
currently
working with MSCI
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Technolgy
.
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I
have attended a several
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seminars
including work-related in my
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own
country.
However
, I have never been
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to
abroad in my whole life.

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Its
been an amazing opportunity for me not
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only
to
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meet
the delegates from
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different
countries
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but
also
to explore country. I am keen to attend this
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seminar
as It will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to grow
professionally
in terms of technical
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skills
.

I would be grateful if you could more detailed information about this
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seminar
such as when this
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seminar
is the schedule and for how
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many
days this
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seminar
will be.
also
kindly provide
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some
information about accommodation and its cost.

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kindly
provide the
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details
as
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soon
as possible
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so
I can
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make
arrangements
accordingly
.

Thank you in advance for your assistance.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Asmita
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IELTS letter Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regard to detailed information about the work-related seminar. I am a software engineer and currently working with MSCI Technolgy. I have attended a several seminars including work-related in my own country. However, I have never been to abroad in my whole life. Its been an amazing opportunity for me not only to meet the delegates from different countries but also to explore country. I am keen to attend this seminar as It will help me to grow professionally in terms of technical skills. I would be grateful if you could more detailed information about this seminar such as when this seminar is the schedule and for how many days this seminar will be. also kindly provide some information about accommodation and its cost. kindly provide the details as soon as possible so I can make arrangements accordingly. Thank you in advance for your assistance. Yours Faithfully, Asmita

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