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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter Introduce yourself Explain what is wrong with the furniture Say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter Introduce yourself Explain what is wrong with the furniture Say what action you would like the landlord to take QLw1L

Dear Ms Linda, I am a tenant in one of your properties in William Street, Norwood. I am writing this letter to bring your attention to some of the substandard furniture that you have provided as part of our rental agreement. In relation to the specifics, I live in Apartment- 17B with my family for the last 4 months. We were excited when we moved into this apartment but disappointed when we found that some of the furniture was old and torn down. The sofa set in the living room is in bad condition. The colour of the cushion has faded out and they are not usable. The coffee table has a broken leg. Besides, the refrigerator in the kitchen does not maintain the desired temperature accurately and the grocery cupboard door locks are missing. Overall, some of the furniture that has been provided is in faulty condition. I request you to look into this matter urgently. I recommend that you get the living room furniture repaired and replace the fridge. I expect your action on this as soon as possible, as these problems are affecting our living and well-being. Yours sincerely, Ramesh Roy

Dear Ms Linda,

I am a tenant in one of your properties in William Street, Norwood. I am writing this letter to bring your attention to If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 substandard You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
 that you have provided as part of our rental agreement.

In relation to the specifics, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in Apartment- 17B with my family for the last 4 months. We were excited
 when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 into this apartment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 disappointed when we found that If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and torn down. The sofa set in the living room is in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 condition. The Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 of the cushion has faded Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).out, and
out and
 they are not usable. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 coffee table has a broken leg. Besides
, the refrigerator in the kitchen does not maintain the desired temperature accurately
 and the grocery cupboard door locks are missing. Overall
, If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
 that has been provided
 is in faulty condition.

I request you to look into this matter urgently
. I recommend that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the living room You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
 repaired and replace the fridge. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 your action on this as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible, as these problems are affecting our living and well-being.

Yours sincerely
,

Ramesh Roy