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you are going away for a week and would like your neighborh to make sure your house is safe while you are away

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Dear Susan, Hello! I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. As we share this close-knit neighbourhood, I am writing this letter because I need your support. I want to inform you that I am going on a two-week holiday to Singapore. I would like to ask you for a favour if you do not mind. I request you to please take care of my house while I am away. It will be opportune for me if you could keep an eye on visitors and mailmen. The security lights need to be switched on and off at 6 pm and 6 am respectively. I have arranged to stop newspaper delivery until I am back. In addition, you can also water the lilies in the front lawn alternately. I have handed over my house keys to my friend, Sam. If you find anything suspicious please do call Sam (9123457), immediately. I am grateful for your cooperation and sorry for any inconveniences this might cause you. I will be leaving on Sunday this week. Thank you Regards to your husband. Yours faithfully, Ishan Gupta

Dear Susan,

Hello! I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. As we share this close-knit Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.neighborhood
neighbourhood
, I am writing this letter This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I need your support. I want to inform you that I am going on a two-week holiday to Singapore.

I would like to ask you for a Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
 if you do not mind. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 take care of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 while I am away. It will be opportune for me if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 an eye on visitors and mailmen. The security lights need to be switched
 on and off at 6 pm and 6 am respectively
. I have arranged to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 newspaper delivery until I am back.

In addition
, you can also
 water the lilies in the front lawn alternately
. I have handed over my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 keys to my friend, Sam. If you find anything suspicious This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 do call Sam (9123457), immediately.

I am grateful for your cooperation and sorry for any inconveniences this might cause you. I will be leaving on Sunday this week.

Thank you

Regards to your husband.

Yours faithfully
,

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Ishan
 Gupta