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You have recently bought a product after seeing a company’s advertisement. You then discovered that the purchased product did not match the description of the advertisement. Write a letter to the manager of that company. In your letter; • describe the product you bought • state the description the advertisement gave of the product • say what you want the company to do to make it up to you

You have recently bought a product after seeing a company’s advertisement. You then discovered that the purchased product did not match the description of the advertisement. Write a letter to the manager of that company. In your letter; • describe the product you bought • state the description the advertisement gave of the product • say what you want the company to do to make it up to you 8Xbk
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with your product which I have recently bought. Yesterday, I saw your company advertisement where you introduced a new type of circular saw with incredible characteristics for those ones. Your company told that the saw is able to make a cut the deeper that competitors saws which represent the market. When I bought your saw and I have to notice that the price is quite expensive, I realize the saw can not achieve those characteristics which were mentioned and my old equipment has the same cut deep as a new one. All in all, I am very disappointed with that equipment which I bought in your store. Furthermore, as the condition of the saw is absolutely new I would like to return it with a full refund. Thank you for your cooperation, I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Alexey.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with your product which I have recently
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bought
.

Yesterday, I
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saw
your
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company
advertisement where you introduced a new type of circular
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saw
with incredible characteristics for
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those ones
. Your
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company
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told
that the
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saw
is able to
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make
a
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cut
the deeper that competitors
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saws
which represent the market.

When I
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bought
your
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saw
and I
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have to
notice that the price is quite expensive, I realize the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
saw
can not achieve those characteristics which
were mentioned
and my
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old
equipment has the same
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cut
deep as a new one.

All in all, I am
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very
disappointed with that equipment which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
in your store.
Furthermore
, as the condition of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
saw
is
absolutely
new I would like to return it with a full refund.

Thank you for your cooperation, I hope to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
, Alexey.
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IELTS letter You have recently bought a product after seeing a company’s advertisement. You then discovered that the purchased product did not match the description of the advertisement. Write a letter to the manager of that company. In your letter; • describe the product you bought • state the description the advertisement gave of the product • say what you want the company to do to make it up to you

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  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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