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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job You should write at least 150 words.

You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job En9B
Dear John, I hope you're doing fine. As you know, I will be coming to Canada for my post-graduate studies in May, I can't wait to meet you after a long time. We will definitely have a lot of fun. I assume you've already found accommodation for me in your house. My course starts on May 14th and my classes are scheduled 3 days a week. Monday, Wednesday, and Thursday are the days I will be at school from 9 am to 5 pm. As I would be free for the rest of the days in the week, I have decided to work during that time. This will cover my living expenses, including rent and my commute to school from home. I request you to help me find a part-time job. You could simply look on the "Kjiji" website or ask some of your friends to see if they are aware of some opportunities or vacancies available in their organization. Please let me know as soon as possible. Thank you in advance. Kind regards, James
Dear John,

I hope you're doing fine. As you know, I will be coming to Canada for my post-graduate studies in May, I can't wait to
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meet
you after a long time. We will definitely have
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a lot of
fun. I assume you've already found accommodation for me in your
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house
.

My course
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starts
on May 14th and my classes
are scheduled
3 days a week. Monday, Wednesday, and Thursday are the days I will be at school from 9 am to 5 pm. As I would be free for the rest of the days in the week, I have decided to work during that time. This will cover my living expenses, including rent and my commute to school from home.

I request you to
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help
me find a part-time job. You could
simply
look on the
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Kjiji
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website or ask
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some
of your friends to
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see
if they are aware of
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some
opportunities or vacancies available in their organization.
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Please
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let
me know as
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soon
as possible.

Thank you in advance.

Kind regards,

James

IELTS letter You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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