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you are going for 20 days vacation and you will tell your neighbour to take care of your house

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Dear Meera, I hope you are fine and healthy. I want a big favor from you. I am going for two weeks vacation. I am requesting you that it would be grateful if you will take care of my house during this time. I know it is long time to leave my house and i am giving you little trouble. Tasks are very simple that you have to do, Already i appointed a decent servant on a temporary basis. He will take care all kind of works like gardening, dusting and all house stuff. But more important is that on tuesday my essential documents are coming, Could you please collect it and put it safely. I am requesting you please keep eye on my house and servant. If any thing happened wrong then you should me call any time. When I returned at my home. I would like to host a small party for your cooperations. Thank you very much for your anticipation. Your help will be appreciated. With Regards, Shivani
Dear
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Meera
, I hope you are fine and healthy. I want a
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big
favor from you. I am going for two weeks vacation.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am requesting you that it would be grateful if you will take care of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
during this time.
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I
know it is long time to
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leave
my
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house
and
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i
am giving you
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little
trouble. Tasks are
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very
simple that you
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have to
do, Already
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
appointed a decent servant on a temporary basis. He will take care all kind of works like gardening, dusting and all
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house
stuff.
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But
more
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important
is that on
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tuesday
my essential documents are coming, Could you
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please
collect it and put it
safely
. I am requesting you
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please
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keep
eye on my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
and servant. If
Did you mean "anything"?
any thing
happened
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wrong
then you should me call any time.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
I returned at my home. I would like to host a
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small
party for your cooperations. Thank you
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very
much for your anticipation. Your
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help
will
be appreciated
. With Regards,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Shivani

IELTS letter you are going for 20 days vacation and you will tell your neighbour to take care of your house

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
170 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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