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you are going for 20 days vacation and you will tell your neighbour to take care of your house

you are going for 20 days vacation and you will tell your neighbour to take care of your house ym8J

Dear Meera, I hope you are fine and healthy. I want a big favor from you. I am going for two weeks vacation. I am requesting you that it would be grateful if you will take care of my house during this time. I know it is long time to leave my house and i am giving you little trouble. Tasks are very simple that you have to do, Already i appointed a decent servant on a temporary basis. He will take care all kind of works like gardening, dusting and all house stuff. But more important is that on tuesday my essential documents are coming, Could you please collect it and put it safely. I am requesting you please keep eye on my house and servant. If any thing happened wrong then you should me call any time. When I returned at my home. I would like to host a small party for your cooperations. Thank you very much for your anticipation. Your help will be appreciated. With Regards, Shivani

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Meera
, I hope you are fine and healthy. I want a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 favor from you. I am going for two weeks vacation. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am requesting you that it would be grateful if you will take care of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 during this time. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 know it is long time to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am giving you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 trouble. Tasks are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 simple that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 do, Already Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 appointed a decent servant on a temporary basis. He will take care all kind of works like gardening, dusting and all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 stuff. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 is that on Possible spelling mistake found.TuesdayTuesdays
tuesday
 my essential documents are coming, Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 collect it and put it safely
. I am requesting you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 eye on my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 and servant. If Did you mean "anything"?anything
any thing
 happened This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 then you should me call any time. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I returned at my home. I would like to host a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 party for your cooperations. Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much for your anticipation. Your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 will be appreciated
. With Regards, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphShivani.Shivani!Shivani?Shivani:Shivani,Shivani;
Shivani