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you have live in english speaking country and you have found some problem

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Dear Mr. James, I am your tenant from 356, mountain hills road on John street in Melbourne. I met a couple of times since I have taken rented at your property in 2018 when I moved here from Italy. I have lived in a dwelling apartment of your property, and I have stayed for approximately five years now. I got some issue on your tenant because I have paid for proper rent amount for every month. I have found out the dining table poor condition. The artistic dining table has found legs broke and other table defects. The dining table is an issue inside the table with ten small holes and two big holes, but my family has to sit to the meals on the floor instead. We have also added meals on the floor. I suggest you can repair that dining table and other furniture. I do not pay extra money for replacement furniture or repair. I know that not much amount, not expenditure the dining furniture. I hope to agree to a proposal to rectify the issue or to take immediately repaid action. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ram Kris
Dear Mr. James,

I am your tenant from 356, mountain hills road on John street in Melbourne. I met a couple of times since I have taken rented at your property in 2018 when I
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moved
here from Italy.

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I
have
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lived
in a dwelling apartment of your property, and I have stayed for approximately five years
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now
.
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I
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got
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some
issue on your tenant
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because
I have paid for proper rent amount for every month.
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I
have found out the
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dining
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table
poor condition. The artistic
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dining
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table
has found legs broke and other
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table
defects. The
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dining
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table
is an issue inside the
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table
with ten
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small
holes and two
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big
holes,
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but
my family
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has to
sit to the meals on the floor
instead
. We have
also
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added
meals on the floor.

I suggest you can repair that
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dining
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table
and other furniture. I do not pay extra money for replacement furniture or repair.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
know that not much amount, not expenditure the
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dining
furniture.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
to a proposal to rectify the issue or to take immediately repaid action.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ram Kris

IELTS letter you have live in english speaking country and you have found some problem

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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