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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions on how to send it back to you

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions on how to send it back to you yrXD
Dear Sam, Thanks for giving the tour to amzing places in Sydney. I am grateful to have a friend like you who not only provided me accommodation during my visit, but also made my holiday time memorable. Last night, when I reached home, I realized that I left my wallet at your place. As you know, I keep my all cards in the wallet; not having cards with me, make me feeling helpless since I can't make any payments. I believe I forgot the purse on the table of the room where I stayed. My uncle will be visiting Sydney tomorrow. Please handover my wallet to him so that, I can have it at the earliest possible time. I would be thankful to you for everything. Love, Mike
Dear Sam,

Thanks for giving the tour to
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amzing
places in Sydney. I am grateful to have a friend like you who not
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only
provided me accommodation during my visit,
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but
also
made my holiday time memorable. Last night, when I reached home, I realized that I
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left
my wallet at your place. As you know, I
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keep
my all cards in the wallet; not having cards with me,
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make
me feeling helpless since I can't
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make
any payments. I believe I forgot the purse on the table of the room where I stayed. My uncle will be visiting Sydney tomorrow.
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Please
handover my wallet to him
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so
that, I can have it at the earliest possible time. I would be thankful to you for everything.
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Love
, Mike

IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions on how to send it back to you

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