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I am writing this letter to draw your attention on rubbish collection system in our area, 1, Street. Previously the system was working properly but right after there was a replacement held in the staff members, on the other hand they discontinued the discipline maintained by the previous ones. For example nowadays they do not have any particular timing and bump at the door at any time of the day. Further more, the laborers are manner less and illiterate, as a result of this inappropriate behavior have a great impact on our day-to-day lifestyle. We as a whole, welfare of 1, Street, are affected in various ways. For example from stinking smell all day long, to heated arguments with the garbage collecting person on daily basis. Children of our society won’t play outside as there is less space left for children to walk, jog and play due to the fact of uncertain previous day rubbish is collected on the streets. To summarize the whole situation we are not satisfied with the services provided from the local council. Importantly, I would suggest training for the current staff members as per law or hire the previous skilled ones to eliminate the nuisance created every morning. Hence, we would be highly appreciable if you work on this as in the near future as possible.

I am writing this letter to draw your attention on rubbish collection system in our area, 1, Street.

Previously the system was working properly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 right after there was a replacement held in the staff members, on the other hand
 they discontinued the discipline maintained by the previous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
. For example
 nowadays they do not have any particular timing and bump at the door at any time of the day. Further
 more, the laborers are manner less and illiterate, as a result
 of this inappropriate behavior have a great impact on our day-to-day lifestyle.

We as a whole, welfare of 1, Street, are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 in various ways. For example
 from stinking smell all day long, to heated arguments with the garbage collecting person on daily basis. Children of our society won’t play outside as there is less space This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 for children to walk, jog and play due to the fact of uncertain previous day rubbish is collected
 on the streets. To summarize
 the whole situation we are not satisfied with the services provided from the local council.

Importantly
, I would suggest training for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 staff members as per law or hire the previous skilled You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
 to eliminate the nuisance created every morning. Hence
, we would be highly
 appreciable if you work on this as in the near future as possible. 