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Dear Mr. Carragher, I am writing to you after going through too many stumbling blocks in order to solve the problem occured last tueesday septmer 13th in the showe room. As you can see, while i was showering, someone apparently stole my bag which contained all of my documents, cell phone and wallet. As this issue is frustrating enough for a student like me, i kindly urge you to solve the matter using your own gym policies and investigation with the staff. I look forward to hear from you soon, Yours faithfully, Elias Daher

Dear Mr. Carragher, I am writing to you after going through too many stumbling blocks in order to solve the problem occured last tueesday septmer 13th in the showe room. As you can see, while i was showering, someone apparently stole my bag which contained all of my documents, cell phone and wallet. As this issue is frustrating enough for a student like me, i kindly urge you to solve the matter using your own gym policies and investigation with the staff. I look forward to hear from you soon, Yours faithfully, Elias Daher lmeJ
Dear Mr. Carragher, I am writing to you after going through too many stumbling blocks in order to solve the problem occured last tueesday septmer 13th in the showe room. As you can see, while i was showering, someone apparently stole my bag which contained all of my documents, cell phone and wallet. As this issue is frustrating enough for a student like me, i kindly urge you to solve the matter using your own gym policies and investigation with the staff. I look forward to hear from you soon, Yours faithfully, Elias Daher
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stumbling blocks in order to solve the problem
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stole my bag which contained all of my documents, cell phone and wallet. As this issue is frustrating
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for a student like me,
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kindly urge you to solve the matter using your
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gym policies and investigation with the staff. I look forward
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IELTS letter Dear Mr. Carragher, I am writing to you after going through too many stumbling blocks in order to solve the problem occured last tueesday septmer 13th in the showe room. As you can see, while i was showering, someone apparently stole my bag which contained all of my documents, cell phone and wallet. As this issue is frustrating enough for a student like me, i kindly urge you to solve the matter using your own gym policies and investigation with the staff. I look forward to hear from you soon, Yours faithfully, Elias Daher

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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