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Ques - A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: 1.Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. 2.Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. 3. Give details of when you would be available for work.

Ques - A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: 1. Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. 2. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. 3. Give details of when you would be available for work. dx5r
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my interest to work as a part-time employee in your prestigious Museum. I heard through the grapevine that you are looking for people who can help the Museum with some unpaid work. I have recently completed my Tertiary Education in History. Working in a Museum will help me to hone my communication skills and can provide me an opportunity to admire the ancient arts and scriptures as I am fond of art since childhood. Also, I am good at client handling thereby helping the visitors to provide them all the necessary information they need. Moreover, I have prior experience in account handling at my father's business. Therefore, I can help the Finance department at any point of time. Since I have recently completed my graduation, I want to spend this weekend with my parents and loved ones. Therefore, I am available to work from next week onwards. However, I will be available only on alternate days as other days I need to take care of my parents and need to spend some time with them. Hoping to receive a positive response from you soon. Yours faithfully, Claire Scott
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest to work as a part-time employee in your prestigious Museum. I heard through the grapevine that you are looking for
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people
who can
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help
the Museum with
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some
unpaid work.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have recently completed my Tertiary Education in History. Working in a Museum will
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help
me to hone my communication
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skills
and can provide me an opportunity to admire the ancient arts and scriptures as I am fond of art since childhood.

Also
, I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
at client handling thereby helping the visitors to provide them all the necessary information they need.
Moreover
, I have prior experience in account handling at my father's business.
Therefore
, I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the Finance department at any point of time.

Since I have recently completed my graduation, I want to spend this weekend with my parents and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
loved
ones.
Therefore
, I am available to work from
next
week onwards.
However
, I will be available
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only
on alternate days as other days I need to take care of my parents and need to spend
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some
time with them.

Hoping to receive a
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positive
response from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Claire Scott
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IELTS letter Ques - A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: 1. Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. 2. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. 3. Give details of when you would be available for work.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
198 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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