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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left wallet there

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left wallet there O72G
Dear Sahithya, I’m writing this letter to express my happiness towards the time which we have spent together. Thank you for your great hospitality and I really cherish those moments. It was a great time that I could recall all our old memories and the time we spent during our college days. In our vacation at your place, we visited plethora of places and spare a quality time. During my stay in you guest bedroom, I enjoyed the view from my window. However, I realized that I have forgotten my wallet in the draw. After reaching my home, When I try to search my identification proofs then I came to know that missing of my wallet at your home. I require that to fill few official forms. Whenever you get a time, Pack it in a cover so there is less chance of missing cards and send it through speed-post. As you aware of my home address and please do mention that. Yours lovingly, Divya
Dear
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Sahithya
,

I’m writing this letter to express my happiness towards the
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time
which we have spent together.

Thank you for your great hospitality and I
really
cherish those moments. It was a great
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
that I could recall all our
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old
memories and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
we spent during our college days. In our vacation at your place, we visited plethora of places and spare a quality time.

During my stay in you guest bedroom, I enjoyed the view from my window.
However
, I realized that I have forgotten my wallet in the draw. After reaching my home, When I try to search my identification proofs then I came to know that missing of my wallet at your home. I require that to fill few official forms.

Whenever you
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get
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, Pack it in a cover
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so
there is less chance of missing cards and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
it through speed-post. As you aware of my home address and
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please
do mention that.

Yours
lovingly
,

Divya
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IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left wallet there

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  American English
7 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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