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You have been offered a place at a university and wish to find suitable accommodation. Write a letter to the accommodation officer including the following information: the type of accommodation you wish to find some details about yourself any special requirements may have and any other relevant information.

You have been offered a place at a university and wish to find suitable accommodation. Write a letter to the accommodation officer including the following information: the type of accommodation you wish to find some details about yourself any special requirements may have and any other relevant information. XdrN
Dear Sir, I have recently received a place in MS Computer Science at your university. I am writing this letter to get some advice regarding a good place to reside during the tenure. My student registration number is 785465. I understand that you provide stay both off and on campus, the latter costing between 200 to 300 pounds per month. I would prefer to live off-campus in a house with two or three students, each allocated a room, ideally a 30-minute walk from the university. I have budgeted around 20 pounds per week. I do not have any specific requirements but would like to share with a person who is more interested in sports. I am a keen rugby player. It would not bother me if the students are from other courses. Please let me know if you need any more details. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Reshma
Dear Sir,

I have recently received a place in MS Computer Science at your university. I am writing this letter to
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get
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some
advice regarding a
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good
place to reside during the tenure. My student registration number is 785465.

I understand that you provide stay both off and on campus, the latter costing
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 200 and 300".
between 200 to 300
pounds per month. I would prefer to
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live
off-campus in a
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house
with two or three students, each allocated a room,
ideally
a 30-minute walk from the university.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have budgeted around
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20 pounds
per week.

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I
do not have any specific requirements
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but
would like to share with a person who is more interested in sports.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am a keen rugby player. It would not bother me if the students are from other courses.
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Please
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let
me know if you need any more
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details
.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Reshma
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IELTS letter You have been offered a place at a university and wish to find suitable accommodation. Write a letter to the accommodation officer including the following information: the type of accommodation you wish to find some details about yourself any special requirements may have and any other relevant information.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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