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You have just returned from shopping with your best friend. Write an E-mail to your English friend: 1. saying why and where you went shopping 2. describing what unusual happened during shopping and presenting the advantages and disadvantages of shopping together 3. asking your friend where and when he likes shop 1

You have just returned from shopping with your best friend. Write an E-mail to your English friend: 1. saying why and where you went shopping 2. describing what unusual happened during shopping and presenting the advantages and disadvantages of shopping together 3. asking your friend where and when he likes shop 1 YVVr

Hi Emily, Hope everything goes well for you. I am writing to you after a long time. I’d like to tell you about my wonderful shopping with my best friend. As for me, going shopping with friends is better than shopping alone. If you need some advice, your friend can help you to select the right color or style. Also, she would be truthful about what’s a good fit and what isn’t. She can encourage you to try something new, but won’t let you get it if it looks ridiculous. That’s why yesterday I took my best friend for shopping with me to choose me new summer clothes. We went to our mall and walked around all our favorite stores. I bought myself some dresses, skirts and t-shirts. And my best friend got for herself beautiful sandals. Therefore, we were satisfied with our purchases. Furthermore, we had much fun and spend our time with benefit. Tell me please what’s your opinion on this matter. Also, i would like to know in which stores do you like to buy clothes. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Ann

Hi Emily,

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Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

Ann