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Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize describe what action you will take

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize describe what action you will take M776
Dear Pravallika, Recently, I had purchased the Sony Sound Bar system. Due to technical glitch in the system, the functional mechanism of music had gone wrong and produced a lot of disturbance in the surroundings area. Unfortunately this created disturbance in the neighboring flats. I am really sorry for the inconvenience and trouble caused to you by my sound system. Actually, the Sony music system was ranked number one on the websites which in turn gave me signs to purchase the product but I personally don't advice to purchase as my system produced noise pollution in the vicinity areas. I am actually returning back the music system to the company so that the technicians can take care to not produce this problem again. I'd give you my word of mouth that this kind of noise pollution will never repeat again from my house. I hope you this resolves the problem. Yours neighborly, Praneeth
Dear
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Pravallika
,

Recently, I had
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purchased
the Sony Sound Bar
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system
. Due to technical glitch in the
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system
, the functional mechanism of music had gone
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wrong
and produced
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a lot of
disturbance in the
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surroundings
area. Unfortunately this created disturbance in the neighboring flats.

I am
really
sorry for the inconvenience and trouble caused to you by my sound
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system
. Actually, the
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Sony music
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system
was ranked
number one on the websites which in turn gave me signs to
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purchase
the product
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but
I
personally
don't advice to
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purchase
as my
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system
produced noise pollution in the vicinity areas.

I am actually
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returning back
the music
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system
to the
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company
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so
that the technicians can take care to not produce this problem again. I'd give you my word of mouth that this kind of noise pollution will never
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repeat again
from my
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house
.

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I
hope you this resolves the problem.

Yours
neighborly
,

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Praneeth

IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
152 words
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