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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect

You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect B6qa

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this to inform you about the misleading information printed on 14th page of your January 21st, 2021 issue under the title “Scenic beauty of Somnath Temple” and was edited by you. One of the paragraph of article discussed about free entrance inside the temple however, due to recent developments, trust of the temple has decided to charge for entry to avoid hassle. Your magazine provides important source of information to numerous people who urge for travelling around the world. Moreover, place about which article described has many visitors throughout the year and is considered to be the holy place according to Hinduism. Additionally, with the change of entry rules, people can book tickets online to avoid last minute rush and that’s why it is important for you to make appropriate changes so that people are aware about it well in advance. Perhaps if you could either reissue this article after rectifying the errors or inform the readers about such developmental changes would be very helpful for you and your company to maintain your trust. I really appreciate you to consider my letter and take steps to make necessary changes as soon as possible. Thank You Yours Sincerely, Mrs. Monika Miller

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Thank You

Yours Sincerely
,

Mrs. Monika Miller