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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.

You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. 6P28
Hi Vishal, This is William from Canada. A very recently I gone through your article which was advertised in one of the Magazine but the information which you were gathered is utterly wrong actually because as I am part of this town probably I know the reality how situation goes on. So, here I would like to draw your attention into the things which you went wrong so please make sure to correct it again and publish soon. Here, it go as I am from this town I am telling very honestly about things what's exactly had done. As you mentioned like government behave very rudely with farmers and take out all agriculture lands from them but here case went on is entirely different pattern we felt extremely happy and we donate those lands to government by taking some amount as well as some extra benefits got from them but your magazine was incorrectly posted everything about our village people. As I am the members of the town I am immensely feeling happy and proud as I am part of the making capital of our own state but your picturised was wrong. So, here I am requesting you to please edit all the comments which you were mentioned previously and rewrite the article with all the new statements because this means a lot to us so make sure to that remember and publish this article with good sub head titles in upcoming article as soon as possible. I hope to hear the response soon, Yours faithfully, Vikas
Hi Vishal,

This is William from Canada. A
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were gathered
is
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actually
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, here I would like to draw your attention into the things which you went
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wrong
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so
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sure to correct it again and publish
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Here, it go as I am from this town I am telling
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very
honestly
about things what's exactly had done. As you mentioned like
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government
behave
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very
rudely
with farmers and take out all agriculture lands from them
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but
here case went on is
entirely
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different
pattern we felt
extremely
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happy and
we donate those lands to
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government
by taking
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some
amount
as well
as
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some
extra benefits
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got
from them
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but
your magazine was
incorrectly
posted everything about our village
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people
. As I am the members of the town I am
immensely
feeling happy and proud as I am part of the making capital of our
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own
state
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but
your
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picturised
was
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wrong
.

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So
, here I am requesting you to
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please
edit all the comments which you
were mentioned
previously and rewrite the
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article
with all the new statements
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because
this means a lot to us
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so
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make
sure to that remember and publish this
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article
with
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good
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sub head
titles in upcoming
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article
as
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soon
as possible.

I hope to hear the response
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soon
, Yours
faithfully
, Vikas
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IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.

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256 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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