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You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very

You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very 2xKdj
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know my views on an article, published by The Daily Mirror with the headline “Town centres in Sri Lanka”. It was well written with facts and figures and current statistics. It is true that there are clock towers erected in the midst of the towns and the shopping complexes revolve around that area. Moreover, most of the government buildings including the local municipality council, electricity board could be found in the vicinity. However, I found the centre of Moratuwa, which is one of the oldest cities in the country quite different from others. Renovated ancient buildings, which belonged to the British ruling era, dominate the centre. Also, the lush green plaza by the river show case beautiful carpentry the city is famous for. Further, the shopping and trading take place in down town furthest from the centre. I would be glad to offer you a guided tour around the town if you wish to know more details about Moratuwa. Please feel free to contact me on 0777123456. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ronny Leva
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
let
you know my views on an article, published by The Daily Mirror with the headline
“Town
centres
in Sri Lanka”. It was well written with facts and figures and
current
statistics. It is true that there are clock towers erected in the midst of the
towns
and the shopping complexes revolve around that area.
Moreover
, most of the
government
buildings including the local municipality council, electricity board could
be found
in the vicinity.

However
, I found the
centre
of
Moratuwa
, which is one of the oldest cities in the country quite
different
from others. Renovated ancient buildings, which belonged to the British ruling era, dominate the
centre
.
Also
, the lush green plaza by the river
show
case
beautiful
carpentry the city is
famous
for.
Further
, the shopping and trading take place in down
town
furthest from the
centre
.

I would be glad to offer you a guided tour around the
town
if you wish to know more
details
about
Moratuwa
.
Please
feel free to contact me on 0777123456.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ronny
Leva
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IELTS letter You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very

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