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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of being your own boss

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An extremely important topic today is related to being your own boss. In last decades, the number of people choosing to start their own business has increased dramatically. There are many cons and pros sides. In this essay I will look at both sides and try to draw some conclusions. One of the main advantage of being self -employed that you are completely self-confidence and you can make decisions on your own. In addition, this can give you great a freedom and allows you to do exactly what you want without interrupts. Another advantage is you can choose how much you want to work and you can stop if you feel like it, when you are your own boss. However, there are some drawbacks too. For example, you do not know about work's instructions you will have some difficulties with it. To sum up, all things considered, when success is achieved the greatest reward of all is the knowledge that you have done it on your own
An
extremely
important
topic
today
is related
to being your
own
boss. In last decades, the number of
people
choosing to
start
their
own
business has increased
dramatically
. There are
many
cons and pros sides. In this essay I will look at both sides and try to draw
some
conclusions. One of the main advantage of being self -employed that you are completely self-confidence and you can
make
decisions on your
own
.
In addition
, this can give you great a freedom and
allows
you to do exactly what you want without interrupts. Another advantage is you can choose how much you want to work and you can
stop
if you feel like it, when you are your
own
boss.
However
, there are
some
drawbacks too.
For example
, you do not know about work's instructions you will have
some
difficulties with it. To sum up, all things considered, when success
is achieved
the greatest reward of all is the knowledge that you have done it on your
own
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IELTS letter Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of being your own boss

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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