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You’ve seen this article in a magazine. Write a letter to the editor commenting on: • the research • the results • why this might happen • how radio affects you personally. Write between 100 and 150 words.

You’ve seen this article in a magazine. Write a letter to the editor commenting on: • the research • the results • why this might happen • how radio affects you personally. Write between 100 and 150 words. R0RNQ
Dear editor, I saw your article in a magazine and I would like to share my opinion. First of all, I think the research is very interesting as 100 people have been tested on the radio. Interestingly, most people listen to current news, but pop music and chat shows are also very popular. A small number of people also listen to classical music. Nowadays, it is very important to be aware of the current affairs. Music and news are the defining elements of our life. Radio has a big impact on our personality or even our mood. I have experienced this many times myself. Last but not least, In my opinion that people do not listen to radio in these days, even though it can have a positive impact on our entire lives, whether it is while studying or even working. Thanks for reading my letter! The article was fascinating to me. Yourfaithfully, Boglárka Apostol
Dear editor,

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your article in a magazine and I would like to share my opinion.

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First of all
, I
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think
the research is
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very
interesting as 100
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people
have been
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tested
on the radio.
Interestingly
, most
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people
listen to
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current
news,
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but
pop music and chat
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shows
are
also
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very
popular. A
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small
number of
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people
also
listen to classical music.

Nowadays, it is
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very
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important
to be aware of the
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current
affairs. Music and news are the defining elements of our life. Radio has a
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big
impact on our personality or even our mood. I have experienced this
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many
times myself.

Last
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but
not least, In my opinion that
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people
do not listen to radio in these days,
even though
it can have a
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positive
impact on our entire
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lives
, whether it is while studying or even working.

Thanks for reading my letter! The article was fascinating to me.

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Yourfaithfully
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Boglárka
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Apostol

IELTS letter You’ve seen this article in a magazine. Write a letter to the editor commenting on: • the research • the results • why this might happen • how radio affects you personally. Write between 100 and 150 words.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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