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Dear Passenger Thank you for flying with us recently. We value your custom and would like to hear about your experinnce. Firstly, we want to know your opinion of our cabin staff (1), as your safety is of the utmost importance. We way? We would also like to know what you thought about the plane (2) and its facilities. Fi your suggestions (3) for improving the overall fiying experience.

Dear Passenger Thank you for flying with us recently. We value your custom and would like to hear about your experinnce. Firstly, we want to know your opinion of our cabin staff (1), as your safety is of the utmost importance. We way? We would also like to know what you thought about the plane (2) and its facilities. Fi your suggestions (3) for improving the overall fiying experience. o5bgg
Dear Customer Services I am writing in response to your email pertaining to my recent flight. With regard to the cabin crew, boarding and disembarking were very efficiently managed. Although I didn't require assistance personally, I noticed that they were prompt in coming to the aid of passengers with young children. However, when it came to serving the snacks, they were rather disorganised, mixing up several orders. I attribute this to lack of experience, as they were all very young. s to lack As for the plane itself, it was obviously brand new, which made me feel secure. There was adequate storage space and the toilets were spotless, In terms of comfort, I felt rather cramped and would have liked more legroom. I would suggest that the overall experience could be improved by reducing the constant announcements about inflight sales and the duty-free trolleys blocking the aisle. Yours faithfully, Feruza
Dear Customer Services

I am writing in response to your email pertaining to my recent flight. With regard to the cabin crew, boarding and disembarking were
very
efficiently
managed. Although I didn't require assistance
personally
, I noticed that they were prompt in coming to the aid of passengers with young children.

However
, when it came to serving the snacks, they were
rather
disorganised
, mixing up several orders. I attribute this to lack of experience, as they were all
very
young.
s
to
lack


As for the
plane
itself, it was
obviously
brand new, which made me feel secure. There was adequate storage space and the toilets were spotless, In terms of comfort, I felt
rather
cramped and would have liked more legroom. I would suggest that the
overall
experience could be
improved
by reducing the constant announcements about
inflight
sales and the duty-free trolleys blocking the aisle.

Yours
faithfully
,

Feruza
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IELTS letter Dear Passenger Thank you for flying with us recently. We value your custom and would like to hear about your experinnce. Firstly, we want to know your opinion of our cabin staff (1), as your safety is of the utmost importance. We way? We would also like to know what you thought about the plane (2) and its facilities. Fi your suggestions (3) for improving the overall fiying experience.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
149 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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