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you have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home.

Dear Sir or Madam, My letter is in regards to knowing the details about the new shopping center, which is to be built near my place. I am a resident of the 125 Serangoon street, and recently I have read a new in our local newspaper about a proposed shopping centre near my place. I am pleased that the local authorities have approved the idea of a new shopping complex in the vicinity, and it will save a lot of our weekend time when we travel miles to fetch groceries and other household supplies. As a curious inhabitant, I would like to know that when we are expecting the commencement of the commercial complex. Additionally, will the shopping space be confined to brands of apparel and electronics gadgets, or will the mall have a supermarket centering on daily needs? I am looking forward to your response. Regards, Pankaj Kumar
Dear Sir or Madam,

My letter is
Use “in regard to”, “with regard to”, or more simply “regarding”.
in regards to
knowing the
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details
about the new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
center, which is to
be built
near my place.

I am a resident of the 125
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Serangoon
street, and recently I have read a new in our local newspaper about a proposed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
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centre
near my place.

I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
that the local authorities have approved the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
of a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
complex in the vicinity, and it will save
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a lot of
our weekend time when we travel miles to fetch groceries and other household supplies.

As a curious inhabitant, I would like to know that when we are expecting the commencement of the commercial complex.
Additionally
, will the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
space
be confined
to brands of apparel and electronics gadgets, or will the mall have a supermarket centering on daily needs?

I am looking forward to your response.

Regards,

Pankaj Kumar
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IELTS letter you have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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