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Write a letter to you manager asking some time off from work to prepare for the exam. In your letter • Give reason why you are taking the exam • Why you need to take time off from work. • How much time off you need.

Write a letter to you manager asking some time off from work to prepare for the exam. In your letter • Give reason why you are taking the exam • Why you need to take time off from work. • How much time off you need. qQjdG
I am writing this letter for some time off from work to complete my studies for exam. I Miss Brown working as intern in accounts department on 2nd floor office. I am having my exams of C. A on 1st week of April which I am appearing it and want a month break for preparing myself for this competitive exam. Eventhough I am preparing for the exam if and when manage to get some time from my studies will come to office help my senior for the back log if any because of me. After clearing my third year of C. A, I shall be more competent and efficient. Hence it would help me toad value to my work in our organization. I will Kindly request to grant me leave for my examination. Thanking you for the same. Yours sincerely
I am writing this letter for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time off from work to complete my studies for exam.

I Miss Brown working as intern in accounts department on 2nd floor office.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am having my exams of C. A on 1st week of April which I
The verb 'appearing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
am appearing
it and want a month break for preparing myself for this competitive exam.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Eventhough
I am preparing for the exam if and when manage to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time from my studies will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to office
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
my senior for the back log if any
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of me.

After clearing my third year of C. A, I shall be more competent and efficient.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Hence
it would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me toad value to my work in our organization. I will Kindly request to grant me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
for my examination.

Thanking you for the same.

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter Write a letter to you manager asking some time off from work to prepare for the exam. In your letter • Give reason why you are taking the exam • Why you need to take time off from work. • How much time off you need.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
139 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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