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Write a letter to your principal reccomending your friend to the position of English teacher write why your friend is suitable write his abilities

Write a letter to your principal reccomending your friend to the position of English teacher write why your friend is suitable write his abilities 3L9jY

Dear Director, The aim which I am writing a letter to you is that as you know there is the vacant position of the English teacher in our school. So, I am going to recommend a candidate for the position and I would confidently say that the candidate who I recommend will please to you. His name is Oybek and I studied at the same school with him and we have still kept in touch each other. He graduated at the faculty of Foreign language philology at Gulistan state university in 2017 and then he worked as an English teacher for three years. In the last four years he has gained some achievements such as the band 7 IELTS certificate, some diploma and so. As well as that, he is the first qualified teacher. On top of this, his pupils have won some Olympiads. In spite of his achievements his director relieved him of his post and he is a jobseeker. I will be grateful if you give employment to him. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Suvonov Abdullo

Dear Director,

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So
, I am going to recommend a candidate for the position and I would confidently
 say that the candidate who I recommend will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 to you.

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some
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. As well
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jobseeker
.

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soon
 as possible.

Yours sincerely
,

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IELTS letter Write a letter to your principal reccomending your friend to the position of English teacher write why your friend is suitable write his abilities

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

185 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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