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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Mr. Jones, I am a student of Tally course in your institution. I am writing this letter to inform you that I can not continue this course. I hope you allow me for the same from next Monday. I work with an Ayurvedic college as a Recruiter. Due to some official reasons, I have to give my extra efforts to college as it's my full time job. I will have a very hectic schedule from next Monday and that's why I will not be able to continue my Tally course. I hope you understand my situation. I also want to clear that I will definately continue my course in your institute after some time. I will be busy in my office for next few months only and after that, I will try to complete the course left in between. You very well know, I genuinely want to do this course but stuck in situation where I can't spare time for such work. I hope you understand my situation and will allow me to complete this course after a break of few months. I will be waiting for your favourable response. Yours sincerely, Sakshi
Dear Mr. Jones,

I am a student of Tally
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in your institution. I am writing this letter to inform you that I can not continue this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me for the same from
next
Monday.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
work with an Ayurvedic college as a Recruiter. Due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
official reasons, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
give my extra efforts to college as it's my full time job. I will have a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
hectic schedule from
next
Monday and that's why I will not be able to continue my Tally
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I hope you understand my situation.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that I will
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definately
continue my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in your institute after
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will be busy in my office for
next
few months
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
and after that, I will try to complete the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
in between.

You
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
well know, I
genuinely
want to do this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
stuck in situation where I can't spare time for such work. I hope you understand my situation and will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to complete this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
after a break of few months.

I will be waiting for your
Possible spelling mistake. ‘favourable’ is British English.
favourable
response.

Yours
sincerely
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Sakshi

IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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