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Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: • give some details about the job • mention how you came across the job opportunity • explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Dear Harleen, It has been so long to hear from you. I am writing this letter to share some information regarding a job vacancy in the company where I am currently working. To begin with, MGI Distribution is going to expand its business in other parts the country. Therefore, they are hiring a plethora of manpower in different departments such as accounts, marketing, and the technical support area. As, you have recently completed your degree in business. Hence, this is a good opportunity for you to apply there as a sales representative. There are great chances for you to get this job because you have worked here during your internship period. Moreover, I come to know this job opportunity from my employer. He set an email to all employees regarding these vacancies. I personly believe that your qualification and experience completely match with the job description. Looking forward for your reply soon as possible. Best Wishes,
Dear
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long to hear from you. I am writing this letter to share
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some
information regarding a
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job
vacancy in the
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company
where I am
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working.

To
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with, MGI Distribution is going to expand its business in other parts the country.
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different
departments such as accounts, marketing, and the technical support area.
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, you have recently completed your degree in business.
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good
opportunity for you to apply there as a sales representative. There are great chances for you to
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get
this
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job
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because
you have worked here during your internship period.

Moreover
, I
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come
to know this
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opportunity from my employer. He set an email to all employees regarding these vacancies. I
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personly
believe that your qualification and experience completely match with the
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description.

Looking forward for your reply
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soon
as possible.

Best Wishes,
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: • give some details about the job • mention how you came across the job opportunity • explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

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  American English
6 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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