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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: Say how you feel about his performance Give details of your musical activities Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

Dear Arman, My name is Ankit Parekh. I recently attended your concert held in Ahmedabad. I wanted to let you know that it was really amazing listening to your songs at a live concert. To commence with, the atmosphere at your concert was impeccable. Everyone in the audience got excited when you came on the stage to sing/perform. I was thrilled to hear you live. I have some basic knowledge of music and I can tell that you did not miss a single note in your performance, even though you were dancing and singing at the same time. I make it a point to attend all of your concerts organized in Gujarat. Last year I even went to Mumbai to watch your live performance during an award ceremony. Additionally, I want to tell you that I am a guitar player. I play here in the local band. Everyone feels that I should try and play in a bigger band or for music composers. If you can give me tips on how to approach the composers or give me a chance to play in a concert, it would be a big opportunity for me. I hope, you would give me tips so that I can learn well and I am looking forward to your next live in concert. Yours truly, (Name)
Dear
Arman
,

My name is Ankit Parekh. I recently attended your
concert
held in Ahmedabad. I wanted to
let
you know that it was
really
amazing listening to your songs at a
live
concert
. To commence with, the atmosphere at your
concert
was impeccable. Everyone in the audience
got
excited when you came on the stage to sing/perform. I
was thrilled
to hear you
live
. I have
some
basic knowledge of music and I can
tell
that you did not miss a single note in your performance,
even though
you were dancing and singing at the same time.
I
make
it a point to attend all of your
concerts
organized in Gujarat. Last year I even went to Mumbai to
watch
your
live
performance during an award ceremony.

Additionally
, I want to
tell
you that I am a guitar player. I play here in the local band. Everyone feels that I should try and play in a bigger band or for music composers. If you can give me tips on how to approach the composers or give me a chance to play in a
concert
, it would be a
big
opportunity for me.

I hope, you would give me tips
so
that I can learn
well and
I am looking forward to your
next
live
in concert.

Yours
truly
,

(Name)
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IELTS letter You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: Say how you feel about his performance Give details of your musical activities Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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