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You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. EJRb
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Chris and I am writing this letter to inform you that I am very much keen to be the part of trips organized by your company Cultural Expeditions. As, it is said that a single wooden pellet is enough to save a drowning man, similarly I have come across many cases where people lose their job because of their inability to converse in English. So, hereby, I would like to train those people to become familiar with English language. I believe in serving the society rather than just focusing on extra income, so it would nice if you allow me to be part of this unpaid work. To start with, I have worked as a language trainer for seven years. I have equipped myself with all the skills required for this work such as communication, management and one to one conversation. Apart from this, I am use to make customized solution for language problems as it differs from person to person. I am completely capable to fetch even the smallest of errors which makes people more accurate with the use of language. Lastly, I would like to share the appropriate time for me to serve. Generally, during weekdays I am free after my work hours that is in evening. Where as during weekends I prefer to spend my time with my family. Initially I would like to serve for one year and if it goes smoothly I will like to continue it for three more years. As I am staying in the west part of city I would request you to arrange services in the nearby location of my residence so instead of spending my time in commuting I can utilize it in training people. Yours faithfully, Chris.
Dear Sir/Madam, I am
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Chris and
I am writing this letter to inform you that I am
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very
much keen to be the part of trips organized by your
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company
Cultural Expeditions. As, it
is said
that a single wooden pellet is
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enough
to save a drowning
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man
,
similarly
I have
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come
across
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many
cases where
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people
lose their job
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because
of their inability to converse in English.
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So
, hereby, I would like to train those
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people
to become familiar with English
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language
. I believe in serving the society
rather
than
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just
focusing on extra income,
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so
it
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would nice
if you
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allow
me to be part of this unpaid work. To
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start
with, I have worked as a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
trainer for seven years. I have equipped myself with all the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
required for this work such as communication, management and one to one conversation. Apart from this, I am
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use to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
customized solution for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
problems as it differs from person to person. I am completely capable to fetch even the smallest of errors which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
more accurate with the
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use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
.
Lastly
, I would like to share the appropriate time for me to serve.
Generally
, during weekdays I am free after my work hours
that is
in evening.
Did you mean "Whereas"?
Where as
during weekends I prefer to spend my time with my family.
Initially
I would like to serve for one year and if it goes
smoothly
I
Did you mean "would"?
will
like to continue it for three more years.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
I am staying in the west part of city I would request you to arrange services in the nearby location of my residence
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
instead
of spending my time in commuting I can utilize it in training
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

Yours
faithfully
, Chris.
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IELTS letter You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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