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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter regarding the course that I am pursuing currently at your center. Unfortunately, I am unable to make it to the end due to some issues. Let me explain more. I am working as a full-time tutor from 8am to 4pm in High School. After leaving the school, I must reach the center for my Computer course. So, it is quite hard for me to run both things together. I wake up early in the morning and I feel tired after finishing the school. As I cook meal for myself and then, I have to make tests and look for the stuff that I am going to teach students on next day. All these daily tasks are not letting me to concentrate on my course. I know that according to your policies, you do not do fee refund. If you would take this into consideration, what I can do is to rejoin the course when I will be on vacation from school. I hope you will not have any problem to take this action. Thank you for understanding my situation. Yours faithfully, Jasdeep
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding the course that I am pursuing
currently
at your center. Unfortunately, I am unable to
make
it to the
end
due to
some
issues.

Let
me
explain
more. I am working as a full-time tutor from 8am to 4pm in High
School
. After leaving the
school
, I
must
reach the center for my Computer course.
So
, it is quite
hard
for me to run both things together. I wake up early in the morning and I feel tired after finishing the
school
. As I cook meal for myself and then, I
have to
make
tests
and look for the stuff that I am going to teach students on
next
day. All these daily tasks are not letting me to concentrate on my course.

I know that according to your policies, you do not do fee refund. If you
would take
this into consideration, what I can do is to rejoin the course when I will be on vacation from
school
. I hope you will not have any problem to take this action.

Thank you for understanding my situation.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jasdeep
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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