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You had a meal at a restaurant But you are not happy about the service that you received. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter, tell him why you had chosen this restaurant.explain why you were not happy with the services and what manger need to do on this .

You had a meal at a restaurant But you are not happy about the service that you received. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter, tell him why you had chosen this restaurant. explain why you were not happy with the services and what manger need to do on this. GMJkB
Dear Manager, I am Himali Bhavsar, recently visited your restaurant. I am writing this letter to express my immense dissatisfaction regarding services which I had received. I heard a lot about your restaurant through social media as well as friends. One of the local radio channel has awarded your restaurant as the finest dine of the town. Therefore, I made a plan along with my family on Sunday. Initially, everything was smooth and food was as perfect as we expected. However, at last when we received a desert, I found a tiny hair in the plate. I was extremely furious and called your supervisor. Your supervisor was quite arrogant and he started doing cross questioning. His behaviour was the concerning area as I won’t prefer the restaurant where they don’t have basic etiquette of managing customer’s complain. Moreover, the hygiene part is the upmost priority kindly do needful in that area so it won’t repeat again. Hoping for the best services! Yours loving, Himali
Dear Manager, I am
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Himali
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Bhavsar
, recently visited your
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restaurant
. I am writing this letter to express my immense dissatisfaction regarding services which I had received. I heard a lot about your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
through social media
as well
as friends. One of the local radio channel has awarded your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
as the finest dine of the town.
Therefore
, I made a plan along with my family on Sunday.
Initially
, everything was smooth and food was as perfect as we
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expected
.
However
, at last when we received a desert, I found a tiny hair in the plate. I was
extremely
furious and called your supervisor. Your supervisor was quite
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arrogant and
he
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started
doing cross questioning. His
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behaviour
was the concerning area as I won’t prefer the
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restaurant
where they don’t have basic etiquette of managing customer’s
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complain
.
Moreover
, the hygiene part is the upmost priority kindly do needful in that area
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so
it won’t
Consider using "repeat".
repeat again
. Hoping for the best services! Yours loving,
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Himali
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IELTS letter You had a meal at a restaurant But you are not happy about the service that you received. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter, tell him why you had chosen this restaurant. explain why you were not happy with the services and what manger need to do on this.

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  American English
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163 words
5.5
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