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Later compliant about work place

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Dear Mr Johnson, I am writing this letter to demonstrate my dejection with the news that work placement program has been canceled. The most crucial reason that I chose your school for studying was the opportunity of working while we are studying at the same time due to the fact that l think gaining experience is the inevitable part of learning, it will help us to enhance our quality of learning. Although your school was extremely expensive, I was happy to pay extra to have better quality
Dear Mr Johnson, I am writing this letter to demonstrate my dejection with the news that work placement program has
been canceled
. The most crucial reason that I chose your school for studying was the opportunity of working while we are studying at the same time due to the fact that l
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think
gaining experience is the inevitable part of learning, it will
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help
us to enhance our quality of learning. Although your school was
extremely
expensive, I was happy to pay extra to have better
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quality
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IELTS letter Later compliant about work place

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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