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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: • explain where you live • describe the problem • give reasons why you do not want this development. • You should write at least 150 words. • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. • You do NOT need to write your own address.

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: • explain where you live • describe the problem • give reasons why you do not want this development. • • • You do NOT need to write your own address. xm0dQ
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to show my dissatisfaction about expanding Vincent Airport and surging the number of the flights. I have talked to other neighbours and they are disagreed with this new project as well. I live in Vincent Parade Road which is five hundred metres away on the opposite side of the airport. The main problem is the airport does not provide enough parking spots, thus there are so many people have to leave their cars on the side of the road. Which leads to congest the traffic in this neighbourhood and air contamination. Moreover, since the airport has been opened, there is no compensation and noise protection from the noise pollution in this province. These are some of the problems that I do not want expanding the airport until authority take the actions about these problems. Authorized people should have asked for our opinions and listen to our concerns. I am look forward to hearing from you soon. Your faithfully
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to
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show
my dissatisfaction about expanding Vincent
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Airport
and surging the number of the flights. I have talked to other
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neighbours and
they
are disagreed
with this new project
as well
. I
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live
in Vincent Parade Road which is five hundred
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metres
away on the opposite side of the airport.

The main problem is the
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airport
does not provide
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enough
parking spots,
thus
there are
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so
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many
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people
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have to
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leave
their cars on the side of the road. Which leads to congest the traffic in this
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neighbourhood
and air contamination.
Moreover
, since the
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airport
has
been opened
, there is no compensation and noise protection from the noise pollution in this province.

These are
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some of the
problems that I do not want
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expanding
the
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airport
until authority take the actions about these problems. Authorized
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people
should have
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asked for
our opinions and listen to our concerns. I am look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Your
faithfully

IELTS letter You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: • explain where you live • describe the problem • give reasons why you do not want this development. • • • You do NOT need to write your own address.

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4 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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