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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: • explain where you live • describe the problem • give reasons why you do not want this development. • You should write at least 150 words. • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. • You do NOT need to write your own address.

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: • explain where you live • describe the problem • give reasons why you do not want this development. • • • You do NOT need to write your own address. kYbBN
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regard to the article in your newspaper dated 7th September. My house is situated within 20 minutes walk of the airport. Please allow me to point out the problems which have caused serious damage on the residential area. I am fully sure that the problems must be aggravated if the plan is carried out to expand the airport and Increase the number of flights. First of all, the low-flying aeroplanes are utterly distractive. They make such a big noise that I cannot concentrate on housework at all. What is worse, I am woken up by the late hour flights at midnight; I was diagnosed as Insomnia the other day. I should call this situation noise pollution. Secondly, I am afraid that the expansion of the airport may reduce the plot of land for the playground which is under construction near the airport at the moment. To sum up, I strongly disagree with the plan. I would appreciate if you could possibly write the article about the problems and disagreement as I said above. Yours faithfully
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing with regard to the article in your newspaper dated 7th September. My
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house
is situated
within 20 minutes walk of the
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airport
.
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Please
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allow
me to point out the problems which have caused serious damage on the residential area. I am
fully
sure that the problems
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be aggravated
if the plan
is carried
out to expand the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airport
and Increase the number of flights.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the low-flying
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aeroplanes
are
utterly
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distractive
. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
such a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
noise that I cannot concentrate on housework at all. What is worse, I
am woken
up by the late hour flights at midnight; I
was diagnosed
as Insomnia the other day. I should call this situation noise pollution.

Secondly
, I am afraid that the expansion of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airport
may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the plot of land for the playground which is under construction near the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airport
at the moment. To sum up, I
strongly
disagree with the plan. I would appreciate if you could
possibly
write the article about the problems and disagreement as I said above.

Yours
faithfully
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IELTS letter You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: • explain where you live • describe the problem • give reasons why you do not want this development. • • • You do NOT need to write your own address.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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