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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir I am writing this letter to request you to grant me leaves for three months from work. As discussed with you, I am going to take a further teaching course called EDU119. Therefore I will require a few months off from my work schedule. EDU119 is a teaching course that requires a lot of time and effort to complete my goals and get outstanding results. Furthermore, I will take three regular months of college-based classes to complete my assignments, and I Need to work on few teaching-related projects. Consequently, I will need a full-time dedication towards this area of study. Although this course requires a lot of commitment at the same time, it would be very beneficial for the organization. Alternatively, I will be qualified as a lead teacher from being an assistant teacher. From my experience, I have seen that there is a scarcity of Headteachers in our country. Additionally, this course study will improve my qualifications skills and benefit the school in the long run. I am looking forward to a positive response from your side. Thank you so much Yours Sincerely
Dear Sir

I am writing this letter to request you to grant me
leaves
for three months from work. As discussed with you, I am going to take a
further
teaching
course
called EDU119.
Therefore
I will require a few months off from my work schedule.

EDU119 is a teaching
course
that requires
a lot of
time and effort to complete my goals and
get
outstanding results.
Furthermore
, I will take three regular months of college-based classes to complete my assignments, and I Need to work on few teaching-related projects.
Consequently
, I will need a full-time dedication towards this area of study.

Although this
course
requires
a lot of
commitment at the same time, it would be
very
beneficial for the organization.
Alternatively
, I will
be qualified
as a lead teacher from being an assistant teacher. From my experience, I have
seen
that there is a scarcity of Headteachers in our country.
Additionally
, this
course
study will
improve
my qualifications
skills
and benefit the school in the long run.

I am looking forward to a
positive
response from your side.

Thank you
so
much

Yours
Sincerely
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IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
185 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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