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The office you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff.

Dear Sir or Madam, Hope I did not catch you at a busy time since I am sure that you have many other important priorities at work to take care of. But, the issue, I want to raise here, is also equally important for our office staff. The reason for which I am writing this letter is that our office does not have any cafeteria for its staff where they can go and sit to enjoy some snacks, drinks and food. Now, this would not really be much of an issue if they did not have to walk about 10-12 minutes to grab something for them when they need something to eat or drink during their short breaks and thus collectively waste many important work hours. Besides, going out like this just to get some snacks or get a cup of coffee is rather inconvenient for us, especially, when the weather condition is not favourable. Therefore, I would like to request you to set up a staff cafeteria in the large empty room at the corner of our office, which remains unused most of the time. That will make sure that our staff have at least one less issue to worry about when trying to be more productive and efficient at work. I hope you will consider the issue and arrange to set up a cafeteria soon. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Andrew Jones
Dear Sir or Madam,

Hope I did not catch you at a busy time since I am sure that you have
many
other
important
priorities at work to take care of.
But
, the
issue
, I want to raise here, is
also
equally
important
for our office staff.

The reason for which I am writing this letter is that our office does not have any cafeteria for its staff where they can go and sit to enjoy
some
snacks, drinks and food.
Now
, this would not
really
be much of an
issue
if they did not
have to
walk about 10-12 minutes to grab something for them when they need something to eat or drink during their short breaks and
thus
collectively
waste
many
important
work hours.
Besides
, going out like this
just
to
get
some
snacks or
get
a cup of coffee is
rather
inconvenient for us,
especially
, when the weather condition is not
favourable
.

Therefore
, I would like to request you to set up a staff cafeteria in the large empty room at the corner of our office, which remains unused most of the time. That will
make
sure that our staff have at least one less
issue
to worry about when trying to be more productive and efficient at work.

I hope you will consider the
issue
and arrange to set up a cafeteria
soon
. Thank you in advance.

Yours
faithfully
,

Andrew Jones
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IELTS letter The office you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
234 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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