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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away, give instructions about how to care for your pet and describe other household duties. Write atleast 150 words.

Dear Carloyn, I'm obliged that you have agreed to house-sit for me. It was a great relief when you agreed to take responsibilites of my house. I would like to thank you for that and inform you some of the household chores you should take care of. If you need any help and would like to contact me during my holiday to Bangkok, please check my dairy which is in leaving area drawer below TV. All contact details are mentioned in that dairy, also I would like to inform you that I would be staying in imperial hotel bangkok city. You can also contact me on my whatsapp number. I have a dog fuzzy, he is to sweet and calm. He needs to be fed twice a day with pedigree which in the cabinet above microwave. Make sure he gets fresh water and also take a small walk daily. I would like you to take a look at some of my household chores. Please water my plants daily of my balcony as well as garden. Also check my mail box everyday and take a look at fridge as I have put their some sticky notes about all these. Looking forward to see you soon on my return. Warm wishes, XYZ
Dear
Carloyn
,

I'm obliged that you have
agreed
to
house
-sit for me. It was a great relief when you
agreed
to take
responsibilites
of my
house
.

I would like to thank you for that and inform you
some of the
household chores you should take care of.

If you need any
help
and would like to contact me during my holiday to Bangkok,
please
check
my dairy which is in leaving area drawer below TV. All contact
details
are mentioned
in that dairy,
also
I would like to inform you that I would be staying in imperial hotel
bangkok
city. You can
also
contact me on my
whatsapp
number.

I have a dog fuzzy, he is to sweet and calm. He needs to
be fed
twice a day with pedigree which in the cabinet above microwave.
Make
sure he
gets
fresh water and
also
take a
small
walk daily.

I would like you to take a look at
some
of my household chores.
Please
water my plants daily of my balcony
as well
as garden.
Also
check
my
mail box
everyday
and take a look at fridge as I have put their
some
sticky notes about all these.

Looking forward to
see
you
soon
on my return.

Warm wishes,

XYZ
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away, give instructions about how to care for your pet and describe other household duties. Write atleast 150 words.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
209 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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