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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away, give instructions about how to care for your pet and describe other household duties. Write atleast 150 words.

Dear Carolyn, I'm obliged that you have acquiesced to house-sit for me and take responsibilities of my house. I would like to thank you for that and inform you few household chores you should take care of. If you need any help and would like to contact me during my holiday to Bangkok, you can call me or WhatsApp me. I would like to inform you that I would be staying in imperial hotel Bangkok city. I have a dog fuzzy, he is to sweet and calm. He needs to be fed twice a day with pedigree which in the cabinet above microwave. Make sure he gets fresh water and please take him for a small walk daily. I would like you to take a look ata number of of my household chores. Please water my plants daily of my balcony as well as garden. Kindly check my mail box every day and take a look at fridge as I have put there a number of sticky notes regarding all information. Warm wishes, XYZ
Dear Carolyn,

I'm obliged that you have acquiesced to
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house
-sit for me and take responsibilities of my
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house
. I would like to thank you for that and inform you few household chores you should take care of.

If you need any
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help
and would like to contact me during my holiday to Bangkok, you can call me or WhatsApp me. I would like to inform you that I would be staying in imperial hotel Bangkok city.

I have a dog fuzzy, he is to sweet and calm. He needs to
be fed
twice a day with pedigree which in the cabinet above microwave.
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Make
sure he
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gets
fresh water and
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please
take him for a
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small
walk daily.

I would like you to take a look
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ata
number
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of of
my household chores.
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Please
water my plants daily of my balcony
as well
as garden. Kindly
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check
my
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mail box
every day and take a look at fridge as I have put there a number of sticky notes regarding all information.

Warm wishes,

XYZ

IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away, give instructions about how to care for your pet and describe other household duties. Write atleast 150 words.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
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