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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Gg0x
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to request you to grant me some time off from work. Because I want to complete my MBA degree. Due to my hectic schedule, neither I am able to study nor able to do my work dedicatedly. For the time off now, I will compensate the hours later, in order to meet the standard working hours for an employee. If the need be, I can support on-demand with my studies. I guaranty you that the MBA degree is going to benefit my work. An MBA graduate has better skills to look at market trends. I will be more equipped to perform well at my job. Also, the knowledge will help the company in the long-run. Thank you so much for your help. I hope you well. Yours faithfully, Binny Arora.
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to request you to grant me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time off from work.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
I want to complete my MBA degree. Due to my hectic schedule, neither I am able to study nor able to do my work
Possible spelling mistake found.
dedicatedly
.

For the time off
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, I will compensate the hours later, in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
the standard working hours for an employee. If the need be, I can support on-demand with my studies.

I guaranty you that the MBA degree is going to benefit my work. An MBA graduate has better
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
to look at market trends. I will be more equipped to perform well at my job.
Also
, the knowledge will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
in the long-run.

Thank you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much for your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
. I hope you well.

Yours
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Binny
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Arora
.

IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
136 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.