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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked you for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • Describe some possible disadvantages • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked you for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • Describe some possible disadvantages • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer bYQR6
Dear John, How have you been? It’s been too long since we were last in touch. Thanks for writing to me. I am very pleased to share my experience about camping with you. You are going to enjoy it! Believe me my friend, you will love this experience because you are going to have an adventure of your own. For example, the bonfire in the night, cultural shows that usually comes in the package, company of amazing people is a lifetime experience. I still remember all the fun I had last year. Though it comes with all the excitement, I must tell you it has some demerits. You will sleep in the woods and there are some incidents of attack of wild animals. Also you will be missing out cozy bed and good night sleep. When I knew what you were doing this summer, I was very excited. I wish to join you but I have been really busy this summer, I am preparing for my college scholarship next year. I hope to join you next time when I am done with my studies. Best regards, Adam.
Dear John,

How have you been? It’s been too long since we were last in touch. Thanks for writing to me. I am
very
pleased
to share my experience about camping with you. You are going to enjoy it!

Believe me my friend, you will
love
this experience
because
you are going to have an adventure of your
own
.
For example
, the bonfire in the night, cultural
shows
that
usually
comes
in the package,
company
of amazing
people
is a lifetime experience. I
still
remember all the fun I had last year.

Though it
comes
with all the excitement, I
must
tell
you it has
some
demerits. You will sleep in the woods and there are
some
incidents of attack of wild animals.
Also
you will be missing out cozy bed and
good
night sleep.

When I knew what you were doing this summer, I was
very
excited. I wish to
join
you
but
I have been
really
busy this summer, I am preparing for my college scholarship
next
year. I hope to
join
you
next
time when I
am done
with my studies.

Best regards,

Adam.
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked you for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • Describe some possible disadvantages • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
187 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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