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You are starting a new business and need to build a website. You have a friend works for an IT company and you need his/her Help, Write a letter to this friend in your letter. Describe your business Ask your friend to help you build the website Say how you will thank your friend for his/her help

Dear sandip, I hope you are fine. I'm glad to write this letter to give you good news that I'm going to start a food court and I think I should create a website for the same and I need your help as I know you are a very good website developer. Nowadays, People are becoming foodie and most people order online food due to the Corona Pandemic. They avoid coming to hotels so I think I would like to represent various foods on my website. I also provide them food at their doorstep. I know you have developed many successful websites in the market, So I want your help and it will be very useful to develop my business. At Present there are many competitors in the market and they are using the same tricks to induce people. So I hope you'll try something different. If possible please come with your family on this Sunday. This way we can get a great family get-together and we will also discuss my business. I look forward to hearing from you soon. With love Hemang Patel
Dear
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sandip
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good
news that I'm going to
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start
a
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food
court and I
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think
I should create a
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website
for the same and I need your
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help
as I know you are a
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very
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good
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website
developer.

Nowadays,
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People
are becoming foodie and most
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people
order online
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food
due to the Corona Pandemic. They avoid coming to hotels
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so
I
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think
I would like to represent various
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foods
on my
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website
. I
also
provide them
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food
at their doorstep. I know you have developed
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many
successful websites in the market,
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So
I want your
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help and
it will be
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very
useful to develop my business.

At Present there are
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many
competitors in the
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market and
they are using the same tricks to induce
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people
.
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So
I hope you'll try something
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different
.
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If
possible
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please
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come
with your family on this Sunday. This way we can
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get
a great family
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get-together and
we will
also
discuss my business.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

With
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love


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Hemang
Patel

IELTS letter You are starting a new business and need to build a website. You have a friend works for an IT company and you need his/her Help, Write a letter to this friend in your letter. Describe your business Ask your friend to help you build the website Say how you will thank your friend for his/her help

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
183 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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