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Appreciation to the hotel authorities

Appreciation to the hotel authorities 5Ly3A
Dear SirI am writing this letter to appreciate a incredible work done by the hotel authorities. It is really a matter of great delight to remember the days we spent in your hotel during this vacation. We got a room on rent in your hotel ( Room No. 17 ) from September 10 to October 20, 2021. This was our first exhilarating experience that we have ever had in our life. We had a whale of time by spending at such a kind of place. It was recommended by one our friend. Indeed, your bed and breakfast is worth that praise. If I talk about the cleanliness and the location our room was spectacular. Natural scenery was seen from room. As far as the meals are concerned, I would like to say it was appetizing. We server appropriately. The behavior of the staff was beyond description. We hardly had any complaint regarding preparation and presentation. However, I have visited to your place many time but I am always looking forward to coming upon here. Even though I have recommended a lot of people who wish to strike to your accommodation. As a matter of fact, this is one the best intriguing place for having fun. Please convey our feelings and appreciation to the management of your hotel. Yours sincerely.
Dear
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SirI
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am
writing this letter to appreciate
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a
incredible work done by the hotel authorities. It is
really
a matter of great delight to remember the days we spent in your hotel during this vacation. We
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got
a
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room
on rent in your hotel
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(
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Room
No. 17
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)
from September 10 to October 20, 2021. This was our
first
exhilarating experience that we have ever had in our life. We had a whale of time by spending at such a kind of place. It
was recommended
by one our friend.
Indeed
, your bed and breakfast is worth that praise. If I talk about the cleanliness and the location our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
was spectacular. Natural scenery was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
. As far as the meals
are concerned
, I would like to say it was appetizing.
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'We'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
We server
appropriately
. The behavior of the staff was beyond description. We hardly had any complaint regarding preparation and presentation.
However
, I have visited to your place
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many time
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but
I am always looking forward to coming upon here.
“Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even though
I have recommended
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a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who wish to strike to your accommodation. As a matter of fact, this is
Did you mean "one of"?
one
the best intriguing place for having fun.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
convey our feelings and appreciation to the management of your hotel.

Yours
sincerely
.
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IELTS letter Appreciation to the hotel authorities

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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