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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract. WWw5
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Manasa and I have been living in your apartment from past 7 months which is located opposite to café coffee day, flat no: 5, Ferry road. If you remember three months ago, we had a coffee together in our house and you appreciated me for keeping your flat clean and neat. As per our rental agreement, I had signed a contract for 1 year i. e. , from June 2020 to May 2021. However, un-fortunately I have to break this contract and feeling regret to do so. I don’t have any other option to get away from it. I am working in an IT company; my boss has ordered me to move to Germany office within a month time. I have requested him so much to postpone this until May, as I can move before renewing our contract. But he did not agree to my request and I have stick to his order to not to lose my job. I hope you understand my situation and help me with further proceedings. Once again, my sincere apologies and waiting for your earliest response. Yours faithfully Manasa Polavarapu
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am
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Manasa
and I have been living in your apartment from past 7 months which
is located
opposite to café coffee day, flat no: 5, Ferry road. If you remember three months ago, we had a coffee together in our
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house
and you appreciated me for keeping your flat clean and neat.

As per our rental agreement, I had signed a contract for 1 year
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i. e.
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,
from June 2020 to May 2021.
However
, un-
fortunately
I
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have to
break this contract and feeling regret to do
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so
. I don’t have any other option to
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get
away from it.

I am working in an IT
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company
; my boss has ordered me to
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move
to Germany office within a month time.
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I
have requested him
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so
much to postpone this until May, as I can
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move
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before
renewing our contract.
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But
he did not
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agree
to my request and I have stick to his order
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to not to
lose my job. I hope you understand my situation and
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help
me with
further
proceedings.

Once again, my sincere apologies and waiting for your earliest response.

Yours
faithfully


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Manasa
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Polavarapu

IELTS letter You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

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6 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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