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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract. 8DwG
Dear Sir, My name is Hero Devrani and I have been renting the flat in Shukan Riverview from you for the past seven months. I am sure you are aware that I have been a good tenant during this period. I always pay my rent on time and keep the flat clean and intact. My rental agreement with you was for one year and the contract ends in December. Unfortunately, I will need to leave flat in October, which is, in fact, two months early. The reason for this is that I have got a transfer order for Japan from my company and as per it I have to report there at the beginning of November month. I am afraid this is beyond my control. As I am now unable to stay here until the end of the contract, I would be extremely grateful if you release me from it early. I am aware that this is not normally allowed but I hope you can understand my situation and would oblige me by returning my deposit. Yours faithfully, Hero Devrani
Dear Sir,

My name is Hero
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Devrani
and I have been renting the flat in
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Shukan
Riverview from you for the past seven months. I am sure you are aware that I have been a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
tenant during this period. I always pay my rent on time and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the flat clean and intact.

My rental agreement with you was for one year and the contract ends in December. Unfortunately, I will need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
flat in October, which is, in fact, two months early.
The reason for this is
that I have
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got
a transfer order for Japan from my
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company
and as per
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it
I
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have to
report there at the beginning of November month. I am afraid this is beyond my control.

As I am
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now
unable to stay here until the
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end
of the contract, I would be
extremely
grateful if you release me from it early. I am aware that this is not
normally
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allowed
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but
I hope you can understand my situation and would oblige me by returning my deposit.

Yours
faithfully
,

Hero
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Devrani
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IELTS letter You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

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6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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